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13 January 2011 @ 10:45 pm
Painfull Fluff  
Title: Painfull Fluff
Author drivvenwrinth
Word Count: 584+/-
Pairings: Shikamaru/ Naruto
Rating: Soft R
Warnings: Angst, COMPLETE, Language, M/M, Oneshot, WAFF, Yaoi, Drabble
Summary: Shikamaru can't get out to see the clouds, so Naruto brings them to him.
Disclaimer: Naruto belongs to Masashi Kishimoto, sadly that means I do not own it and have gained nothing for writing this.
A/N: Just a fluffy sweet drabble, hope you enjoy. Thank you to the very best beta and sister, fairyniamh.

One brown eye opened, then the other. When he recognized the ugly white tile ceiling, he groaned. Nothing hurt at least, but that was probably linked to the numbness he felt from the neck down.

Tsunade was always telling him that if his body was too damaged, she’d find a way to revive his head and keep it alive with a chakra web. ‘Maybe she’s actually done it this time.’
He knew his injuries were bad. He hadn’t actually expected the second team to reach him in time to save him. ‘Damn, I’m really gonna miss sex.’

As if conjured by the thought, a tear streaked face appeared above him, blocking out that awful ceiling. Droplets struck his face, pouring from big blue eyes.

“Is he really gonna be okay?” Naruto sobbed.

“Right here, getting dribbled on…” His voice croaked from lack of use.

Naruto moved to pounce on him. “Shika!”

If he could have dodged he would have, but he couldn’t move. Shikamaru cringed and mentally
braced himself for impact and the pain that would follow.

Kakashi and Iruka had his upper body while Genma and Raidou held the dumbfounded blond’s legs. “Calm down Naruto or you’ll hurt him,” Iruka ground out.

“Oh Kami! I’m sorry!” The shaggy blond head drooped. “I didn’t mean to.”

“It’s okay Baka, we understand.” Kakashi patted his hair.

“And we knew you’d do something stupid, like this.” Genma didn’t exactly whisper. The other three men rounded on him. “What?”

Raidou pulled a chair up to the bedside. “Why don’t you sit here kid?” He turned, hooked Genma’s arm with his just as Kakashi caught the other and the snide little shit was pulled from the room just in time to save him from one of Iruka’s famous thrashings.

“Okay Naruto. I’m going to come back to get you when visiting hours are over and don’t think you can sneak back in. Nara-kun needs his rest and so do you. You’ll be staying with me until he’s out of the hospital. “Get better soon Shikamaru.”

Iruka left them alone and all Shika could do was stare at the mottled cruddy ceiling. “Naruto?”


“Come lay on the bed with me.”

“You sure it’s okay?”

“Do I always have to repeat myself?”

“Not in bed.” The blond quipped, feeling a little better as he carefully climbed up beside his injured partner. “You scared me.”


“I know, it’s the job.”

‘I wish I could hold him.’

“I love you.”

Naruto raised up, then leaned over him, so that they were nose to nose. Shikamaru smiled. ‘Definitely a better view.’

“What did you say?”

“I. Love. You. Baka.”

Those blue eyes went round then sparkled bright enough to outshine the sun. “You’ve never told me that before.”

“And what are you supposed to say in return??”

Naruto rolled his eyes and grinned. “I love you too lazy ass.”

They cuddled until Iruka came to drag Naruto out and Tsunade came to knock Shika out, luckily she used drugs rather than her fists.

The next morning Shikamaru woke up to an odd sight. The ceiling was a pretty shade of blue. Hanging from string were cut outs of pretty white fluffy clouds cut from paper. The strategist smiled. His lover may be unconventional, but damned if he wasn’t all heart.

He sighed with tears in his eyes. “I love you too.”

Current Mood: coldcold
Idoleiaidoleia on June 24th, 2011 12:06 am (UTC)
This was very cute and well written! Made my day :)
drivvendrivvenwrinth on June 24th, 2011 12:09 am (UTC)
I'm so glad. I love making people happy with my stories. Those two are my first and favorite couple.

Thanks for the comment. :)
cherry_mizuki: Cute R27cherry_mizuki on December 23rd, 2011 04:06 am (UTC)

Is the first fanfic than I read in english (normally I read in spanish, but the fics of this pairing are few) and was great and very cute.

I hope read more of your fanfics with this pairing (I love these two). Mmmm it's all.

Bye bee
drivvendrivvenwrinth on December 24th, 2011 07:01 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. I wish I was bi-lingual. I'm sure I'm missing out on a ton of great stories and authors... This is my favorite pairing and my first love. I agree, there really aren't enough good stories with this pairing. If you find any good ones, I'd love a link to it.

In return all I can offer is this:

I have a few other stories with pairing (From the Abstract to the Practical, Hentai Sunburn, and Why My Bed) and then a few with ShikaNaruNeji.

My sister fairyniamh also wrote a lovely ShikaNaru as a gift for me some time ago (Betrayal and Bonds). If you are over 18 I can add you as a friend, and you could read them at my journal. If you want to be friended by fairy, you only have to pm her and ask to be added. Be sure to giver her your full birthdate, since it's not in your profile. We have to be careful because of the content and where we live.

Also, if you are unfamiliar with AFF (adultfanfiction) I would recommend checking it out. They have some stories you can't find here or on FF (fanficiton.net) Fairy and I are on there and at the bottom or our profile pages we nave a list of recs. A link to my profile there: http://naruto (dot) adultfanfiction (dot) net/authors (dot) php?no=1296839653 (Don't let the sign in page scare you. It is just to help them stay out of trouble and not to get you into any.)

Anyway, Thanks for the comment. Comments feed the muses! Hope you find lots of good stories out there. Happy Holidays!